My Script Looked Different Once I Had to Say It

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When I started writing my Coach Alliance video, I thought the difficult part would be deciding what to say. I already knew my work. I teach digital skills, work in graphic design and create content. I assumed I would mostly need to organize those things into a two-minute script.

It was more complicated than that.

One thing I learned is that a sentence can look perfectly normal on a page and still sound strange when spoken. I noticed this when I started reading parts of my script aloud. Some sentences were technically correct, but I would not naturally say them that way to a student sitting in front of me.

Two minutes is not much time

The 1:30–2:30 limit also forced me to remove things.

At first, I wanted to mention more of the software I teach, more of my experience and more examples of my work. It started feeling like a spoken résumé. That was not what I wanted.

I eventually centered the script on one idea: I can show someone where to click, but if that person cannot face a real problem alone later, I have not really taught the skill.

That gave me something to return to whenever I was unsure about a sentence.

Writing for the ear

The other lesson came later, while preparing the video itself. A script is not only words. Every sentence takes time, needs a visual and has to leave enough space for the viewer to follow what is happening.

I had written scripts before, especially for content creation, but this assignment made me pay closer attention to that relationship. Now when I read a video script, I find myself hearing it instead of only reading it.

That is a small change, but I noticed it.

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Alliance PEMOSSO

Alliance PEMOSSO

Alliance is a communication consultant, trainer, and NLP coach based in Brazzaville, and the Managing Director of Melbo Studio. He writes here about communication, design, and what he is learning in COMM 310 at Ensign College.


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