Feature Writing Gives Me More Room, but That Can Also Be the Problem

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News writing and feature writing do not feel the same to me.

With a news article, I know that I have to get to the point quickly. The important information belongs near the top. The reader should not have to search through five paragraphs to understand what happened. I actually like that discipline because it forces me to decide what really matters.

Feature writing gives me something different. It gives me room.

I can stay longer with a person, a place, a detail or even a small moment. If I were writing a feature about a trainer in Brazzaville, for example, I could describe what happens before the training starts, what the room looks like, what the person notices, or the way a participant reacts to something. Those details might not survive in a straight news article.

That is probably the biggest strength for me. Feature writing can make a person feel present in the story.

But the freedom can also become a weakness.

When there is more room, it is easy to keep writing simply because I can. I know this problem from other kinds of writing. I sometimes want to include one more explanation, then another example, and suddenly the main idea is harder to see.

News writing does not give me that luxury.

While working on my article about AI use in Brazzaville this week, I had to choose what mattered most from my conversations with Cyprienne KENAKALE and Chris MOUSSOKI. I could have written much more about AI in general. That would probably have made the article weaker. The real story was in what those two people were actually doing with the technology.

Feature writing would let me stay with them longer.

News writing made me decide faster.

I do not think one form is automatically better. I am starting to see them as different kinds of control. News writing controls the amount of information.

Feature writing gives me more freedom, but then I have to control myself.

That part may be harder.

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Alliance PEMOSSO

Alliance PEMOSSO

Alliance is a communication consultant, trainer, and NLP coach based in Brazzaville, and the Managing Director of Melbo Studio. He writes here about communication, design, and what he is learning in COMM 310 at Ensign College.


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